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    My Reply
    In your eyes i see a light that cannot be forgotten.
    You touch my soul with just one smile.
    Your voice calms all my troubles.
    You give me hope of a better life.
    You give me... peace of mind.

    I am real, not just a ghost concieved by your dreams.
    Let me be the one to guide you back into the light.
    You don't have to be lonely.
    I will be your only, if you will let me.

    Don't worry, just let your soul fly.
    I will protect you from all of the unseen.

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    Qualin commented on My Reply

    04-26-2010

    SHOULD NOT THE OTHER BE THE PROTECTOR OF SUCH A JEWEL? I WOULD BE HARD PRESSED TO BE GUILTY OF SUCH....GUESS I NEED TO KNOW MORE ABOUT THE INNER SUBJECT MATTER HERE...QUALIN
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    DeepEclipse commented on My Reply

    11-20-2009

    Subtle and touching words. It shows the vunerableness of appreciation and the firmness of protecting someone. Poetic indeed for someone to have this type of access to you. Again though, I find myself wanting more. Wanting to know more to the story. Hopefully this person gives back what you give to them. Well written.
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    Stargazer commented on My Reply

    08-30-2009

    Excellent poem. You are truely a talented poet. I enjoyed reading all of your poems.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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