Muse

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    Muse

     The light in your eyes sets my soul on fire
    For the subconscious desire
    pulls me in higher
    Flying above all that conspires
    As if your soul was a beautiful aurora bursting from within
    your human attire
    Forever inspiring the flow of creativity
    From within my own well of individuality..
    For you are.........My Muse

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    kaddeesh commented on Muse

    09-18-2009

    I agree with another commentor, Melissa. You are definitely a talented Poet. You've got some good pieces of work here. Keep them coming!
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    DeepEclipse commented on Muse

    08-17-2009

    I like the rhyme flow and the way you played the words. Taking one into that metaphorical realm. I only wish it was longer. Just my opintion.
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    AmadeusEx commented on Muse

    06-29-2009

    this little piece packs some punch, i like the well of individuality line...some wells are fuller than others i imagine, but you can fill that well anytime you like
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    cagle64 commented on Muse

    06-24-2009

    nice short piece can feel the passion and desire in this work keep it up
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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