My Solemed Wall,

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    My Solemed Wall,

    A day at a time your soul was honest , wanted our love to survive.
    I know now cause you didn't know his arrival .
    Though as you said in the past , she done you great wrong.
    Yet again twice gone with the same women .
    There for crushed fire with in this heart again.
    Letting you see inside my heart for you have died for reasons
    which , we must depart again.
    There for stand a fool letting you see inside my highest wall.
    There forth I stand naked watching them bleed as they fall .
    My heart silenced , blackens burnt deep into the core
    but why should you care for you will dwell these never more .
    Driven twice with the same women , you've destroyed from with in .
    Least now cause of you no one else will ever get in.
    Days of her love there for will never last.
    Don't expect to turn around this time , there's no bringing
    back.
    Hope you can sleep knowing what you've done to me.
    For thy love I had never go forth angel of mine.
    I guess I wish you all the best for alone have heard the last
    breath anxiously waite.
    For one ,watching as time ticks away till once more comes
    through your door anticipating the touch of her velvet hand.
    To await for your kiss almost more than I can stand.
    If he comes my way some day is naught for I am cot.
    Love is his web and in my days spent pondering .

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    TwistedAce commented on My Solemed Wall,

    02-01-2009

    Sincerely heartfelt and moving. Most definitely a poem many can relate to

    rollerderby commented on My Solemed Wall,

    01-30-2009

    You're right to let this love die and move on. There is only hurt and heartache ahead if the coarse hadn't changed. I'm sorry you had to experience the pain to see the light. But you're better off on the road you have taken. well done! Doug

    magicmanzz commented on My Solemed Wall,

    01-26-2009

    you have a very tender soul reading your poems i can almost feel your pain very nice job,....

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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