Pieces of Me;

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    Pieces of Me;

     There's a hole where,my heart should be
    Lye's brocken on the floor right in fronht
     of you
    Soul's been deceased lying in pieces
    My mind speakes of death feeling the need
     to go to you
    As I decided to waite one more day I end
     thy pain
    Being my world my everything,now there for
     taking away
    For granted to this day I should say
     We were so much in love
    Thy people see,now gone for dead
    Many ways to have destroyed my life
    Live off thy memory of you
    The real you has taking a vacation and
     some one has taken your place
    This is mean and sarcastic

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    bets commented on Pieces of Me;

    04-21-2011

    This is so amazing, RiDawn! I love the first line, it's so good! -Bets
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    RiDawn

    04/21/2011

    Thank you very much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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