In A dream

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    No joke thought of this while I was in the shower. LOL

    In A dream

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    As one awaits,treasures one's true first kiss.

    As one's heart beats fierce,reminisces every

    moment for the rest of time.

    AS one suddenly awaits to show honestly all

    one has to offer.

    As one wishes to have one's true emotions

    in one another's pure thoughts.

    As one wishes to have one's true reality, seeking

    deep in another night.

    As one who's dreampt about, thinking which to

    have held.

    As one whom couldn't have known what's next

    till all sadly falls benith you.

    As one whom speaks,one's true thoughts,through,

    worsened by anothe's disappointing words.

     

    as one seems to have thought there long life dream

    seeks right before another's eyes.

    AS one quite expects something more.

    As one though yet hasn't remarkabley experienced

    nor have felt another's spontaneous touch.

    As one who is udderly waiting,for one whom received

    or even known to respond.

    As one who's not sure to have expected one's mind

    which isn't pure,free.

    As one who shares this love will soon have been silenced.

     

    As one awaits,treasures one's true first kiss.

     

    As one's heart beats fierce,reminisces every

    moment for the rest of time.

    AS one suddenly awaits to show honestly all

    one has to offer.

    As one wishes to have one's true emotions

    in one another's pure thoughts.

    As one wishes to have one's true reality, seeking

    deep in another night.

    As one who's dreampt about, thinking which to

    have held.

    As one whom couldn't have known what's next

    till all sadly falls benith you.

    As one whom speaks,one's true thoughts,through,

    worsened by anothe's disappointing words.

     

    as one seems to have thought there long life dream

    seeks right before another's eyes.

    AS one quite expects something more.

    As one though yet hasn't remarkabley experienced

    nor have felt another's spontaneous touch.

    As one who is udderly waiting,for one whom received

    or even known to respond.

    As one who's not sure to have expected one's mind

    which isn't pure,free.

    As one who shares this love will soon have been silenced.

     

    As one awaits,treasures one's true first kiss.

     

    As one's heart beats fierce,reminisces every

    moment for the rest of time.

    AS one suddenly awaits to show honestly all

    one has to offer.

    As one wishes to have one's true emotions

    in one another's pure thoughts.

    As one wishes to have one's true reality, seeking

    deep in another night.

    As one who's dreampt about, thinking which to

    have held.

    As one whom couldn't have known what's next

    till all sadly falls benith you.

    As one whom speaks,one's true thoughts,through,

    worsened by anothe's disappointing words.

     

    as one seems to have thought there long life dream

    seeks right before another's eyes.

    AS one quite expects something more.

    As one though yet hasn't remarkabley experienced

    nor have felt another's spontaneous touch.

    As one who is udderly waiting,for one whom received

    or even known to respond.

    As one who's not sure to have expected one's mind

    which isn't pure,free.

    As one who shares this love will soon have been silenced.

     

    As one awaits,treasures one's true first kiss.

     

    As one's heart beats fierce,reminisces every

    moment for the rest of time.

    AS one suddenly awaits to show honestly all

    one has to offer.

    As one wishes to have one's true emotions

    in one another's pure thoughts.

    As one wishes to have one's true reality, seeking

    deep in another night.

    As one who's dreampt about, thinking which to

    have held.

    As one whom couldn't have known what's next

    till all sadly falls benith you.

    As one whom speaks,one's true thoughts,through,

    worsened by anothe's disappointing words.

     

    as one seems to have thought there long life dream

    seeks right before another's eyes.

    AS one quite expects something more.

    As one though yet hasn't remarkabley experienced

    nor have felt another's spontaneous touch.

    As one who is udderly waiting,for one whom received

    or even known to respond.

    As one who's not sure to have expected one's mind

    which isn't pure,free.

    As one who shares this love will soon have been silenced.

     

    As one awaits,treasures one's true first kiss.

     

    As one's heart beats fierce,reminisces every

    moment for the rest of time.

    AS one suddenly awaits to show honestly all

    one has to offer.

    As one wishes to have one's true emotions

    in one another's pure thoughts.

    As one wishes to have one's true reality, seeking

    deep in another night.

    As one who's dreampt about, thinking which to

    have held.

    As one whom couldn't have known what's next

    till all sadly falls benith you.

    As one whom speaks,one's true thoughts,through,

    worsened by anothe's disappointing words.

     

    as one seems to have thought there long life dream

    seeks right before another's eyes.

    AS one quite expects something more.

    As one though yet hasn't remarkabley experienced

    nor have felt another's spontaneous touch.

    As one who is udderly waiting,for one whom received

    or even known to respond.

    As one who's not sure to have expected one's mind

    which isn't pure,free.

    As one who shares this love will soon have been silenced.

     

    As one awaits,treasures one's true first kiss.

     

    As one's heart beats fierce,reminisces every

    moment for the rest of time.

    AS one suddenly awaits to show honestly all

    one has to offer.

    As one wishes to have one's true emotions

    in one another's pure thoughts.

    As one wishes to have one's true reality, seeking

    deep in another night.

    As one who's dreampt about, thinking which to

    have held.

    As one whom couldn't have known what's next

    till all sadly falls benith you.

    As one whom speaks,one's true thoughts,through,

    worsened by anothe's disappointing words.

     

    as one seems to have thought there long life dream

    seeks right before another's eyes.

    AS one quite expects something more.

    As one though yet hasn't remarkabley experienced

    nor have felt another's spontaneous touch.

    As one who is udderly waiting,for one whom received

    or even known to respond.

    As one who's not sure to have expected one's mind

    which isn't pure,free.

    As one who shares this love will soon have been silenced.

     

    As one awaits,treasures one's true first kiss.

     

    As one's heart beats fierce,reminisces every

    moment for the rest of time.

    AS one suddenly awaits to show honestly all

    one has to offer.

    As one wishes to have one's true emotions

    in one another's pure thoughts.

    As one wishes to have one's true reality, seeking

    deep in another night.

    As one who's dreampt about, thinking which to

    have held.

    As one whom couldn't have known what's next

    till all sadly falls benith you.

    As one whom speaks,one's true thoughts,through,

    worsened by anothe's disappointing words.

     

    as one seems to have thought there long life dream

    seeks right before another's eyes.

    AS one quite expects something more.

    As one though yet hasn't remarkabley experienced

    nor have felt another's spontaneous touch.

    As one who is udderly waiting,for one whom received

    or even known to respond.

    As one who's not sure to have expected one's mind

    which isn't pure,free.

    As one who shares this love will soon have been silenced.

     

    As one awaits,treasures one's true first kiss.

     

    As one's heart beats fierce,reminisces every

    moment for the rest of time.

    AS one suddenly awaits to show honestly all

    one has to offer.

    As one wishes to have one's true emotions

    in one another's pure thoughts.

    As one wishes to have one's true reality, seeking

    deep in another night.

    As one who's dreampt about, thinking which to

    have held.

    As one whom couldn't have known what's next

    till all sadly falls benith you.

    As one whom speaks,one's true thoughts,through,

    worsened by anothe's disappointing words.

     

    as one seems to have thought there long life dream

    seeks right before another's eyes.

    AS one quite expects something more.

    As one though yet hasn't remarkabley experienced

    nor have felt another's spontaneous touch.

    As one who is udderly waiting,for one whom received

    or even known to respond.

    As one who's not sure to have expected one's mind

    which isn't pure,free.

    As one who shares this love will soon have been silenced.

     

    As one awaits,treasures one's true first kiss.

     

    As one's heart beats fierce,reminisces every

    moment for the rest of time.

    AS one suddenly awaits to show honestly all

    one has to offer.

    As one wishes to have one's true emotions

    in one another's pure thoughts.

    As one wishes to have one's true reality, seeking

    deep in another night.

    As one who's dreampt about, thinking which to

    have held.

    As one whom couldn't have known what's next

    till all sadly falls benith you.

    As one whom speaks,one's true thoughts,through,

    worsened by anothe's disappointing words.

     

    as one seems to have thought there long life dream

    seeks right before another's eyes.

    AS one quite expects something more.

    As one though yet hasn't remarkabley experienced

    nor have felt another's spontaneous touch.

    As one who is udderly waiting,for one whom received

    or even known to respond.

    As one who's not sure to have expected one's mind

    which isn't pure,free.

    As one who shares this love will soon have been silenced.

     

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    Rosegirl96 commented on In A dream

    07-20-2010

    This is extremely well written, you are talented:) I often think of my own work in the shower, and you did great with this one you get a 9 from me

    RiDawn

    01/27/2011

    Thank you You are verry kind

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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