NUMB

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  • Friendship

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    YET ANOTHER FROM MY FRIEND

    NUMB

     Can't move from this spot.
    Anger and frustration.
    How can we hurt each other like this.
    We don't know any other way.
    Logic and sense is gone.
    I never really was holding on.
    You gave me emotions when I was numb.
    You made me happy and it felt wrong.
    When you aren't here I have nobody.
    When you are here I push you away.
    The words that matter we forget to say.
    I've lost you in so many ways.
    I don't know who I am today.
    I'm numb again.
    You're broken.
    Hurtful words are spoken.
    Things I can't control.
     This has taken its toll.

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    muzani commented on NUMB

    07-06-2009

    expressive in all its words, definately reflecting personal issues... I liked the rhgtht iyme, but then I thought it needed more words after "this has taken its toll".
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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