Nuts

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    Nuts
    Scantly clad ideas
    Sipping milk from
    My reservoir;
    I'm your thief.
    My daily desire,
    To take your breath away.

    Seems like only yesterday
    Huffin' and puffin' up Washington ave.
    Speedin' on my mighty huffy.
    Now I'm huffin' and puffin',
    As you love me.
    Where does the time go?

    Unemployment has fired my ambition.
    I martyr the idea of being smarter
    And let seconds gain, dumb am i.
    I need some brains.

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    silentwhisper commented on Nuts

    03-09-2009

    Not bad, leaves one to ponder deep, thoughts.!
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    MikeSiZaChrist commented on Nuts

    03-02-2009

    I am admittedly opposed to complimentary pleasantries, but I was surprised to see this after reading you first poem. An obvious gain in fluidity and artistic expression.
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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