our love

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    our love

    The feeling that i get
    is to much for me to take
    so strong wherever i am,
    like the tingling chill of a snow flake
    it is delicate and crisp in nature
    yet this chill begins to blaze,
    my blood flows as lava,
    my stomach is a boiling pot,
    here butterflies flutter not
    in their place the fiery phoenix
    drawn tro the burning of my heart
    for my soul burns as does the sun
    my aura its corona,
    you are the reason i burn so bright
    why darkness was replaced by light
    your eyes twinkling like starlight
    while your heart and soul reflect the moon
    still with all to lose and nothing to gain
    i shy from you as if i were fire and you the rain
    its not fear that makes me shy from you
    for i can feel you from afar
    to you love has stuck me
    like a star it guides me to my love
    however when i go where you are
    my chest and head begin to ache
    i am filled with more love than one can take
    and my hands begin to shake
    yet all i want is your hand to take
    just to stand it takes all my might
    though i long to be lost in that starry sight
    when i see you i cant help but stare
    wishing i could show you how much i care
    so many times i've hessitated
    though my plans have gone a rye
    my love still speaks to me and yours to i
    your trhe only one to make me cry
    remember when i gave you my heart
    it was yours stolen from the start
    and when anger burns my heart like coal
    your love rains down to soothe my soul
    i knew i loved you when i first met you
    every day since my love just grew
    even now when our eyes meet
    my heart still skips a beeat

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    Khalaera commented on our love

    04-03-2014

    Thats sad Ended you say, well continue on swooning as you do

    namnoiz commented on our love

    05-16-2009

    good one lakugo!

    NayInLove commented on our love

    02-20-2009

    lovely lovely

    prophesy commented on our love

    02-15-2009

    nothing like a true found love./contiue blessings

    lakugo

    12/08/2010

    sadly the relationship had ended long b4 i posted this poem however it was written for her

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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