Put A Spell On Me

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    Put A Spell On Me

    I'm traped by your power.
    Your eyes make me freeze in place.
    You put a spell on me.

    You make me want you.
    Your smile makes me want to kiss your soft lips.

    I cannot have you.
    I do not want you.

    Yet, I do.
    My heart burns for you.

    Why do I love you so,
    you hurt me in so many ways.
    Yet, I still yern for you.

    By
    Rebecca

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    shultz commented on Put A Spell On Me

    01-11-2011

    B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L!!!! i love how simple that poem is and how complicated the meaningful of each words on the own way.. great job... 10 from me tooo

    Artie commented on Put A Spell On Me

    07-09-2010

    To feel such attraction on any level, is the greatest/worst thing of all. We want with all our being, and despise with all our hearts - 10 from me

    Beetle726 commented on Put A Spell On Me

    11-25-2009

    Nicely put. The spell has you trapped for what you desire. Maybe the same spell will set you free.

    Phoenix9 commented on Put A Spell On Me

    11-03-2009

    very nicely put , In a few words you send your desire and feelings out in the open

    Grito commented on Put A Spell On Me

    08-21-2009

    Ok, ok, I'll lift the spell. There, I've set you free, your body, but not your mind.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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