Remember Me

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    Within this piece I had finally mentioned something I had never mentioned before in my writing. I had mentioned my self harm. The main point in this though is that when I die, I want to live on through my poetry.

    Remember Me

     A writer a loss for words,
    Much like an artist with no canvise.
    These blue lines I write upon are merely imaginary,
    For these are my veins.
    With every touch of my pen these words seem to melt; transforming into a liquid state.
    Flowing, circulating.
    They seem to always find a way back to my core.
    No matter how drastic the measures my chest will forever rise and fall.
    What you see before you will make me immortal.

    ~H.C. 

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    SuziJean commented on Remember Me

    04-05-2013

    Wow. I like the metaphors and Imagery. I can't see you but I can feel your voice in your words. and it seems part of your soul is held gently with in the lines. Very good.
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    xoxang3lxo28

    04/05/2013

    Thank you so much

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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