Sanctuary

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    Poem Commentary

    Having recently been inspired to write poetry, this latest piece just about sums up my feelings!

    Sanctuary

    I’ve found this place inside my head,
    Where I record my thoughts in rhyme.
    It really is, a delightful place,
    And while's away the time:
    The words transpire and then they flow,
    Like music to my ears.
    It offers me a sanctuary
    And erases all my fears.

     I cherish this place inside my head,
    All cosy and surreal;
    The words appear and then they write,
    An expression of how I feel…
    So when I’m wretched in despair,
    And life doesn’t treat me kind.
    I’ll venture to that little place
    To see what words I find!

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    “Sanctuary”
    By: Jane Gill-Wilson

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    Sx9 commented on Sanctuary

    10-23-2010

    may feel like that but it is more that a place to chill,it is ur soul inspired with the passion of sanctuary and so we call it poetry..this piece is the master piece of why we write,,this is how it all break down..
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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