Should We Be Birds

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It is a determined fact that when a  bird is of a certain age, momma bird pushes it from the nest. Not to harm it in any way, but to teach it that it must fly

Should We Be Birds

Should We be Birds: Drew Lancaster

Mama bird, like life

Puts baby bird to the test

The outcome two options

One life, Two Death


Suprised by time

Shortness of breath

Suddenly life strikes

Pushing us from our nests


Falling fast

Being so afraid

Time now of essence

Life has so betrayed


Fear grips the mind

Now unable to speak

Pray you know I would

Only tears can I weep


Just then it seems

All is lost in vain

Grace sends a wind

Love whispers your name


Be strong my child

Make your life a song to sing

When you fall child

Remember these two things


Grace the wind to fit you

Accept the love He gives you

And last of all

This one thing


Remember the song in your heart

Remind yourself to sing

And when all else fails, come rain come hail

His love will give you wings

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Hampton commented on Should We Be Birds

11-12-2009

The experience of fear that gripes us all when we must face life alone. A birdseye view.

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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