So long…

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    • kreilin010
    • hisashiburi ne? it's been a while, hasn't it? or more like, it's been almost a year since then...

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    June 27, 2010

    So long…

    It’s been so long since I last saw your face,

    my! can time fly past, so quickly.

    I cannot stop this throbbing pain,

    of wanting to touch you again, but being unable to.

    Try as I may, I wait and wait, and yet to my disdain,

    I still end up not being with you, at the end of the day.

    When will it come, the time again,

    A day I’ll spend with you?

    When will you turn, and smile again,

    give me joy, so I can hum a happy tune.

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