Sophie

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  • Inspirational
    • anniebloom
    • I just lost the love of my life, my heart & my soul, my Dad. The strength that I used to hold on to, is gone. But I know, he's living in my heart forever. From the day he went, I realized that all this while, throughout the struggles, pain, sorrow even until the day he passed, I was on my own, standing and breathing. I learn that, even as a woman, we don't really need to count on someone else to survive. Love is pain, and lose it, sucks. But I'm strong. I don't need to lean on anybody to get up

    Sophie

    Sophie

    By Annie

     

    Shall I name the ring as a diamond?

    Must I steal the crown just to have the title?

    Should I break the glass just to make it sharps?

    Will the windows explain the weather outside?

     

    The more I treasure the questions

    The more I seek the properties

    The more I answer the sophistication

    The more I drown into deep blue sea

     

    Never had I known what Sophie clings to

     She seems to be rich

    Yet rich with awesomeness

    She shows her greatness

    Yet I’m treasuring the sadness

    She shows her manner

    Yet had she hide her best presents?

     

    Sophie shows her solace in emptiness

    I see Sophie, I sing for Sophie

    Are you the best Sophie

    Or only name that describes you Sophie?

    I need to treasure more

    With more of the pride you show

    People talk, you silent

    Shhh Sophie,

    You talk, I admire!

     

    THE MORE COMPLICATED WAVE YOU PRODUCED

    THE MORE I TEMPTED TO TREASURE IN YOU

    AS YOU ARE THE BEST WOMAN, NOT ONLY AS A WOMAN

    AS A TEACHER, SISTER FRIEND AND MOTHER!

     

      

     

     

     

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    Solaris commented on Sophie

    09-13-2011

    your work isn't as lyrical as it is emotional I love poetry like that it grabs you by the heart and paints a picture in your soul well done
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    optimistic commented on Sophie

    06-16-2009

    Very interesting piece some of your words in the poem seem to break up one was already mentioned, and I take you go from the beggining of the story to talking about sophie then it ends so quickly I love this piece of work. these lines especially, must I steal the crown just to have the title, will the window explain the weather outside. Keep writing I like your work
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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