Sorry Sinking Soul.

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Is Shame a symptom of not being fully forgiven? I struggle with being fully forgiven, and letting things go in my mind that I have done and are still feel guilty and shame about.

Sorry Sinking Soul.

Can't Stand how I am,
Trudging in this desperate sinking sand,
Of Guilt... and shame.

It looks as if,
My dying words will be, "I'm Sorry"
"I'm Sorry, for reasons and things unexplained.
 
I'm Sorry , for bringing terrible selfishness,
 To your name." 

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Worthless commented on Sorry Sinking Soul.

08-24-2011

short and sweet.. i'm sorry for being me..

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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You and Me 1
No Key 0
Sorry Sinking Soul. 1
A Heart on the Outside. 1
Easy As Pride. 1
Here it is, Don't make me regret it. 0
I'm not insane... Yes you are. 0
Wont Stop (Pt. 2) 0
Wont Stop 0
Ever green, Never To Be. 0
SHE. 0
You Can't. 0
An Anxious Castaway 0
An Infamous Memory. 1
Surreal Reality. 1
Can't Stand. 0
Can't Find My Mind 2
Just... Justified 1
Thy self be hidden. 0
Amy. 1
Embracing Letting Go. 2
Sleep. 2
I've Arrived. 1
Deceiving love charmer. 2
Finding What Matters 0
Forget it. 1
Today there is a regret. 0
Door. 0
I'll Use Hope, To Cope 0
Saved. 3
Even In The Night 1