Tell Me

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    Tell Me

    "Tell Me"

    Tell me is it a secret?
    A secret from me, a secret from her.

    Tell me is it real?
    What do you feel.

    Tell me do you care when I look in your eyes?
    Do you feel when you see me cry.

    Tell me how it is when we're a part?
    How do you feel, am I in your heart?

    Tell me, do I light up your day when you see me first?
    When I'm not around do you feel worse.

    Tell me is it a secret?
    A secret from you, a secret from us.

    Tell me the answers that I need today?
    So I can move on in some kind of way...

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    Lucho commented on Tell Me

    08-08-2009

    Nice words. I like this poem because it reminds me how important communication is in a relationship. It is never fun to not know how much someone cares for you or if they miss you and think of you all the time. I hope you get your answers.

    UnworthyFather commented on Tell Me

    06-14-2009

    Wonderful portrayal of a lover caught in second place. Someone who needs to feel their love returned wholeheartedly. Great Job!! Thanks for sharing.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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