"Remember Me"

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  • Lost Love

    "Remember Me"

    "Remember Us"


    I remember the first time I saw you, your smile brightened my day.
    Like the warm sun after the morning rain..
    From that moment on our friendship grew and we became close
    We always laughed, we always joked..

    I was with someone and you were married, it stood in our way
    Til we decided to meet down that dirt road that rainy Wednesday day...
    We were like two kids, nervous on our first date
    But when you touched my face we knew it was fate...

    I knew right then with a friendship like we had and the closeness we shared
    That the love was already there...
    We said it wouldn't go no further than that
    But how can you stop a love like that...

    One week later at 2am you knocked on my door
    With that same smile you had when we first met 2 yrs before
    So that is when our love began
    I never thought that it would end

    Six months later our love was gone
    You left so quickly I felt I could never go on
    You were my friend, my lover, the man in my life
    I never thought there would be a day that you would go back to your wife

    Always know that I love you and I always will care
    Please don't ever forget the love that we had shared
    My love for you is still here, it will always be.
    Waiting for the day that you'd come back to me...

    You are my soulmate
    We are meant to be
    Just remember the love
    Remember Me....

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    AdokenxRazahl commented on "Remember Me"

    11-02-2009

    I know exactly what it is like to be suddenly dropped by someone who is supposed to love you forever.

    justicejosiah commented on "Remember Me"

    10-06-2009

    I would like to encourage you to consider the meaning of love. If he would not keep his commitment to his wife, after the ceremony and repeating of vows why would he be true to something much less? There is a love that is unfathomable and it's desire is for you.

    Lucho commented on "Remember Me"

    08-08-2009

    I can't believe this one. It is such a tragedy. There is nothing worse then being left out of the blue by your lover. It really makes us doubt ourselves and if what we had was really true. I really like your style and themes. We share the same points. Keep it up

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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