The Art of Baling Hay

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I wrote "The Art of Baling Hay" for a lovely lady to give to her husband on their 50th anniversary...His favorite thing to do on any given day was to bale hay...I thought what a lovely gesture to honor him  by his wife with a poem telling about his love of baling hay...Juanita Pittman-Brown

The Art of Baling Hay

 

The Art of Baling Hay 
Revisited

Out I go with vigor to absorb

The beauty of the day  --

Out I go with subtle joy

To gather and bale the hay…

I know that fall will come

And winter too will pass  --

Spring will cross the horizon  --

And summer will come at last…

From season to season

From winter’s ebony

To the brilliance of a July day  --

What brings to me great pleasure

Is the art of baling hay…

Some would not see the beauty

In the sculpture of the straw  --

But as memories reappear

Someday they will recall

The beauty they once saw…

The bales are formed

And placed in fields

As reward of labor done

For the turning of the seasons

And cycles of the sun…

Could I find a greater passion

Than sharing the earth in harmony

And viewing creation

As patchwork beauty

Across the quilted land I see…

Spring will gently smile  --

Summer will ease the sun

Across the heated sky  --

Fall will greet winter’s pallet

As to summer it says good-bye…

And yet the bales of hay

Will hold the flavor and memories

Of days gone past

And what I will recall

Will be the baling of the hay

And doing what I love that last…

The art of baling hay

Provides for the artist

A way to sculpt the earth

And in the beauty of the design

One comes to understand

What the art of baling hay is worth…©


 By Juanita Pittman-Brown

2006


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castlemist commented on The Art of Baling Hay

06-19-2009

I baled hay as a kid growing up in rural Ohio...what a beautiful piece of poetry...I can feel the sun on my face and the mesquitos on my neck...great work!

whatamothersays

06/19/2009

Jerry, Thank you for your comment on my poem The Art of Baling Hay...It is so wonderful when others read your work and appreciate what you feel in your soul and write...I am grateful to you for your thoughts and expression ofyour appreciation... I love your work as well...I so enjoy metaphors and analogies and depth of the soul expressed in poetry, as in your writing...Juanita Pittman-Brown

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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