The Door: Forgotten

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    The Door: Forgotten

    stumbling upwards lost feet and pride
    stricken with light breaths, try
    skin leaping not tearing into
    smile closed, eyes open
    You.
    art is all around but the reach is still unknown
    focus on nothing.
    no touch will exceed the numbers that I fail
    You.
    “I want to be a universe; I want to be the flame”
    faltering again precision has no game
    her touch was soft on that cold Door
    but she wants everything and only
    You.
    her difference made confusion of colors
    sense was nothing
    puzzles of herself, she was the queen
    knowing was everything
    falling apart or sticking together molds
    "down I go through the rabbit whole"
    one step in the air could have knocked her to her feet
    yet her pride was unsettling
    art is what has found her still
    she wants only to nurse art, bring it up inside
    confusion, of course, is part of the Doors lie
    You
    forgetting about the Door completely
    is of little surprise
    creatures of darkness made an arise
    thoughts now pushed her back and pulled
    You.
    how many winds did you hear?
    how many masks were shear?
    soft, hard, graceful, timid, tan
    which description is my hand in?
    what hand is my description?
    hand in which description?
    description is my hand.
    art turns into numbers
    calculating now
    nothing.
    nothing.
    nothing.

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    Musicmynded1 commented on The Door: Forgotten

    09-15-2010

    mmmm perfect title for it........................................ yeah.

    UnworthyFather commented on The Door: Forgotten

    06-19-2009

    Beautifully written!! Wonderfully chaotic! I love the way that you have twisted these words into something that causes the reader to stop and think, and how you have entwined art from beginning to end. Really well done. Thanks for sharing. 10

    litldeer commented on The Door: Forgotten

    03-05-2009

    Excellent. I like how you ended this, nothing, nothing, nothing - great way to end. Fantastic!

    clown commented on The Door: Forgotten

    02-14-2009

    very nice

    shugdaddy commented on The Door: Forgotten

    02-14-2009

    very interesting

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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