The March To Hell (3/5)

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(E.M.)

The March To Hell (3/5)


I recall days, when I laid, in better positions/

Or is it plural? I had to whether opinions/

Yet, as I lay between nature and machine/

Crowds of followers, gather for a scene/

Whom are these idiots, that stare into the past//

And, only, see the future/

All I see are Schmoosers/

Destined for Hell: low lives, and low class//

Empty space- in their minds grows grass//

The temp in here is high, may I have the A-C/

This place is disgusting, and I may sweat, please/

Why is there no peep, or even no sound/

Standing in this line and I don’t even know how/

Look these pathetics/

Don’t even have ethics/

I use to live a life//

Snap a finger- I would get it/

I could have been a wife//


But I was too smart/ and “working” too hard/

On the roof all day/ his children would “play/”

I’d laugh at their, weak, father-

“Hubby! Fetch me some lemonade”/

I would sprawl to relax, on the turquoise chair/

Swam laps with a cap , to protect my hair/

When the roof was done, I would inspect it/

Give them a shout, causing them new perspective/

Those children were his, I could never be a breeder/

Gave them “Time-Out,” I could never be a speaker/

Then I would be a politician and they are idiots, too/

That believe public is better than the ed of a private school/


A horned man cuts the line and his stenches engross me/

Like the foul mouth that wrinkles on Nancy Pelosi/

Oh! Just the thought makes me vomit//

Atleast contemplate, the fact/

I use to hope to give it all back/

And become another noodle in a pack of Raamen’s//

My wish has come true, but the pack is now dirt/

Get me out of this Hell, as my back is now burnt/

Atleast, some of the process/

I want to hang myself, like one of the prophets/

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dahlusion commented on The March To Hell (3/5)

12-31-2010

A powerful piece of writing that not only is unique but reveals the depth of your spirit, your integrity, and dignity. Bravo!!!!!!! Peace and Light, dah

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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