The moment

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    The moment
    you're watering the flowers
    -a pleasant smile on your face-
    and i think of this very moment
    a hundred years
    later...

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    oreo5560 commented on The moment

    09-25-2009

    There are always moments in our lives that stay imprinted on us that no matter how many years go by we will never forget..I have been going throught that often the past couple of years-wondering why sometimes my heart and mind have remembered something maybe so simple yet obviously important!
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    Blueroad

    09/25/2009

    I agree with you, and I think the reason why those simple things cannot be forgotten is that most probably they have brought about a great and everlasting change in our life.

    lindabrito commented on The moment

    09-21-2009

    I am glad to see that you are writing more. I love to read your work, so keep it up o.k. Linda
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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