The Next Kiss

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    The Next Kiss

    If I should own the oceans,I'd give them all to you
    Complete with all the beaches,to show my love is true
    Never just my lover,but always my best friend
    It's you I'll share all time with,until all time should end
    Watching clouds for visions,while walking along the shore
    Seeing dreams on new horizons,and Baby so much more
    Your sending out a rainbow so bright and confident
    The beauty that you show me,is so very innocent
    At times when I am lonely,and looking where to turn
    I imagine you are with me and I notice your concern
    I close my eyes and hold you,well into the night
    Somehow our dreams together,can make me feel alright
    Your hair,your eyes,your smile are things that I do miss
    But nothing makes me want you,like the taste of our next kiss

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    HarverTomsson commented on The Next Kiss

    06-12-2009

    But first Slim, find out what she wants, then give that to her. I'm thinking islands rather than oceans, metaphorically that is. The trick is knowing how to make a dream come true. In defense of the poem, the last line does create that desired climactic moment.

    peacefully commented on The Next Kiss

    05-04-2009

    very nice and sweet.Loved the flow.

    kdarcy commented on The Next Kiss

    05-04-2009

    I thought it was nice, I can relate to it. Not my style but, I like the flow.

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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