The Sound Of My Dreams

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    The Sound Of My Dreams

    I can't breathe

    And my heart keeps beating

    Speeding faster still

    But the calls ended

    And my pulse leaves my nerves standing on end

    The sound of his voice

    Runs through my head

    My nervous rejoice

    I know it's because of him

    I love him

    I've realized thats true

    But how much I can't be sure

    My coherent thoughts are but a few

    And when I think of him

    I just can't stay still

    But all too soon...

    My high is falling down again

    I'm losing the sound

    That takes my breath away

    The secret to the end

    And how he makes my nightmares fade away

    "Sweet dreams"

    I barely hear him say

    Beause his voice is slipping away

    Lost from my conscienceness

    And the night wont fade

    So I'm sitting on the edge again

    Hanging by a single thread

    And all that I need is from him

    To save me one more time

    I just need to hear him say

    "I love you" again tonight

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    satch commented on The Sound Of My Dreams

    06-08-2009

    This is a very well expressed and emotional veeling that can be felt as you read along knowing the anxiousity that is so moving you dread anything that will bring it to a bad ending

    Phoenix9 commented on The Sound Of My Dreams

    02-10-2009

    very good,

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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