the thin line between

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    the thin line between

    the line between is pencil thin
    and once you've crossed it
    you've unleashed a beast within...
    but you don't know it.

    with on little step, what you think is in out of the cold,
    you slip into an eerily induced world with dreams of
    prodiginous romance for a weary soul.
    that is...your mind...your soul, grow into another.

    another world, or does it?

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    lightcourier commented on the thin line between

    03-19-2009

    2nd part kinda loses the rhythm. I liked the 1st 4 verses. Perhaps that's good...or no?

    caspiancri commented on the thin line between

    03-13-2009

    do you mean "with one little step"? this is one to think about deep meaning

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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