Time

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Time

Time I have too much of
Time to do what I should not
Not thinking, not breathing-
Suffocation on my own sadness.
I close my eyes, see what I was
and what I could have been.
My vision focuses, aware of where and
what I am.
Two friends I only have,
My knife and my pillow,
stained with bitter tears
of thoughts swimming in my head.

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optimistic commented on Time

06-07-2009

If you give your soul and rest and let your heart feel again my friend you have something to look forward to. Keep writing your spirit will eventually wake you and take you from these thoughts, I can see the talent from this poem. Keep writing, this poem is great.

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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