UNBORN

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    This Poem is about an unborn fetus writing to his mom from haven. the fetus has been aborded by his mother. i'm sorry if i afind anyone but these or my thoughs and my was to express myself.

    UNBORN

    Two weeks are here I’m starting to form

    a few mouths later my mommy's starting to show

    Three mouths have come and gone,

    Now four and my mommy has let me go!!!

    The fifth and sixth mouth I would have almost been here

    Seven now eight I’m in heaven that’s were I’ll be

    The ninth mouth is here and mommy still cries

    I know she still cares but no way to stop it now

    I’m with Jesus where I’ll be for all eternity.

    I love you mommy,

    Your unborn child

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    Jewels commented on UNBORN

    07-06-2009

    This pome along with you others I have read really touch my heart and made me cry! I cryed only because I have been through the same things!!

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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