Slipping away

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  • Confusion

    Slipping away

            Sitting motionless in thought, going crazy in my head. Alive according to conciousness, to society I'm dead.
            The mind contained is twisted, all that remains, insanity! Present in the peoples mind, gone to all humanity.
            Absent from the body, my soul finishes the rhyme, let it fade in the moment, but let it echo in time.

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    icu2 commented on Slipping away

    10-17-2009

    Ohhh. Good stuff! You make the reader feel just where you are on the roller coaster of emotions. Like it!
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    lonelynotalone

    10/17/2009

    Im happy you feel that way. i didnt think i was capable of making the reader feel like that. Thank you for the compliment.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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