Vanity

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    Vanity
    Vanity
    By: Eduardo Acevedo Jr.

    Very Sensual, Sexy
    Ambitious Female, Lady of lies
    Never Feels distressed her beauty is diamond precise
    Impressionable, the best way described is untouchable
    Temperamental, but you cannot tell her she is
    Yearly earnings spent on her, men lay broken in her path
    Initial thought executed by the swish of her hair and quickness of tongue
    Salivation; men and women stare but only the wise do not envy
    Unflawed, unstressed, undressed she’s a queen
    General perception shattered, bubble bath unseen
    Lady lioness cannot ever mention a mistake in her making
    Your saying so will not kill this beauty unique
    Menacing smile, backed with intentions to match
    You can say she carries a being that does not complement her physique
    Perfection is her motto, her reflection can’t be touched
    Exceptional set of mind, denigrating mentality
    Obsession, delusional world created and reached with no fuss
    Playgirl involved and can’t breathe
    Luscious totality in haste, partially true
    Enigmatic decision, locate the strength to solve it and live
    See through the deception ridden fog in order to find YOU

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    sincere commented on Vanity

    09-08-2009

    My God, is there anything u can't do! I love this one. Disturbing part is that I read alot of my chracteristics in this poem, lol. Is that a bad thing? Anyway, exellent work!
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    jmylez commented on Vanity

    07-10-2009

    some females are truely like this for real and some times it's hard to tell love or lust with such deception,,nice poem,,deep
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    cheohs

    07/11/2009

    I feel you on that brother, I knew that from the get go, I wrote this back in high school lol. by the way read the First Letter of Every Line athe way down.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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