Hey, Smiles...

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Its a poem about a girl who could brighten my day, with only her smile. And yes, the last line comes from the fall out boy song "pretty in punk". I hope y'all like it.

Hey, Smiles...

What’s up Smiles? How was your day?

Oh, me you ask? I’ve had better, I can say.

But there is one thing that can brighten my mood;

If you haven’t guessed it, let me give you a clue…

 

Like a Google’s “find,” search your mind for the answer,

Don’t stress to hard, or you might develop brain cancer.

Still haven’t figured it out, check under your nose,

And allow me to tell you how this next line goes.

 

“Would you mind if I sat next to you,

 and watched you

 smile?”

 

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poetryprincess commented on Hey, Smiles...

10-01-2012

Love the sweet write and I would love to just watch someone smile.... It would make me smile! :) keep writing.... I'm looking forward to more poems by you!

new2poetry

10/21/2012

Thanks so much for the kind words. Means a heck of a lot, and boosts my ego, a little bit. The funny thing is I wrote this in high school about a girl I had a crush on, and I haven't seen her in a while. Maybe I should give her a call or shoot her a text 0.0 LOL

poetryprincess

10/23/2012

Hey maybe u should show the poem

am2anangel commented on Hey, Smiles...

01-19-2011

short but very sweet write. Hope you add more poems soon. well done. -Tonya

new2poetry

11/23/2011

Hey, thanks for the comment! Im glad some one out there in this whole wide world read my poem and liked it =) By the way, I know your comment was from way back, but I still appreciate it!

irielove commented on Hey, Smiles...

01-19-2011

totally cute poem, id love to sit and watch someone one smile!!!

new2poetry

11/23/2011

Thanks for the love! Trust me this girl has a smile that kills me every time I see her, lol. Anyway thanks for the reading my poem!

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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