Where Did We Go

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    Where Did We Go

    Where Did We Go

    Early morning as I rise,

    You don’t even open your eyes;

    You use to want this time together,

    Now you seldom even say good-bye;

    With passing time, I’ve watched you change,

    Yet all my love for you remains the same;

    Your love for me use to come so easy,

    Now it seldom comes at all;

    Could it be we’re really over,

    Is all our love gone;

    Is it time to face the hurt,

    That I’ve dreaded for so long;

    Can you tell me -

    Where did we go wrong?

    Please tell me

    Just where did we go ?

    　

    Donna A. McCoy

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    Nohea517 commented on Where Did We Go

    08-27-2009

    A beautiful and true poem about love and love lost. Thank you for sharing this and I look forward to reading more of your work.
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    Dcoy

    08/29/2009

    Well I do have plenty of them to read ...BUT I will not use them all...THANKS FOR COMMENT and Vote...

    StandingBear commented on Where Did We Go

    08-19-2009

    An extraordinary work depicting the state of love/lost love. Great write.
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    Dcoy

    08/24/2009

    Thank you so much for the good comment...I have books and books of my writings. I just have never done anything with them so I thought I would put some on here to see what people would say about them...Thanks again, Donna

    StandingBear

    08/31/2009

    You are most welcome...your writing is a pleasure to enjoy. Mike

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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