While I'm With You

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    While I'm With You

    my heart and soul is so full that it begins to overflow
    with you by my side I truly care for you this I know
    I can't believe how you've been treating me with the things you say and do
    it opened up my mind, body, and soul to new adventures that I want to experience with only you
    I really can't explain right now why I'm feeling this way
    all I want is the love that's growing between us to go the same way
    the way you treat me is so wonderful that I would never replace

    because you treat me like the beauty queen I am with so much grace
    I love it when you come around and spend time with me
    I love it even more when you show appreciation and let me be me
    its hard to believe the connection and chemistry that we have
    even more because you try to give me the world that I never really had
    just by the things that you say and do has really touched my heart
    the way that I feel right now I never want us to grow apart

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    ccslim commented on While I'm With You

    05-13-2009

    Super start! Bring the best your heart can bring in true and concise clarity. Remember with original poetry there are no editors to cover the slack.

    Godzgyft1985

    07/30/2009

    Thank you for your feedback I really appreciate that.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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