You Touched Me

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    You Touched Me

    You touched me
    In deepest winter
    Kissed my palms like a revered queen
    Your hands blessed by Aphrodite herself
    You touched me in every way that counted
    Body and soul I lost all control

    You heard me
    In spring time's pride
    When I screamed your name in passion
    And when I whispered more I want more
    You heard my quiet breathing as I slept
    And the tears I secretly wept

    You saw me
    During the haze of summer
    Standing naked in your gaze adored
    Dancing to the passion you ignited
    You saw me beyond the mask as I peaked
    I wish once through your eyes a look I'd sneaked

    You loved me
    In the fall of our life
    A dream no a fantasy made real
    One more kiss for a lovers delight
    With every ounce of passion
    And even more with compassion

    You touched me
    In all the seasons of our life
    Branded me as yours for eternity
    I wait longing for your return
    You touched me
    And I feel it still


    © kismet 2009

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    dj commented on You Touched Me

    09-07-2009

    Deep and moving thoughts; brings back a lot of memories for me..

    Steaf commented on You Touched Me

    04-02-2009

    that iz so endearing

    AlexBourne commented on You Touched Me

    03-04-2009

    Filled with emotion and I love how you worked in the seasons.

    TheAngelOfDeath commented on You Touched Me

    01-22-2009

    love poems that come from the heart are hard to discride. you need a (LITTLE)more detail on this one to really get teh full emotional reaction out of a poem.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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