letting go of all reality..

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letting go of all reality..

the sound of your voice
echos in my ears
through my mind
every second
you appear
like a shadow on a sunny day
always behind me
beneath me
like lightning
you send shock waves
that rumbles through my body
your voice
like a faint whisper
...
haunts my every thought
wanting to rid your cursed murmurs
insane
you must be
as the day grows colder
the breathe you take
holds back
in the back of your throat
a rush of the frosted winds
wrapped around your waist
pushing you
...
to the limit
the ground
cold and unfriendly to all life
the ground
you lay upon
...
the sun
hidden beneath the gray painted clouds
the shadow
flows in the wind
trying to grasp your torn cloth
holding
waiting
until the chills that stormed out of those clouds
with speed they soar
letting go
the shadow
gone
all darkness caves in
on the moment
all around it learks
all but your awkward body
lays upon the cold and hardened ground
alone
for just a moment
shadow-less

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Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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