simply summer

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simply summer

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the sky,
so blue.
the grass,
so green.

the countless shades of summer,
hide behind every leaf,

 shooting smells of golden nectar that collect on each dandelion.
filling my nostrils with delight.
 
Leaves,
bloom around each breeze,

sending the sound of waves whistling a tune;
 maple trees begin to dance with joy as the day comes to an end.

as the sun goes down,
the night has fallen upon each pink cheek,

nesting in their beds,
dreaming,
deaming of summer
Alas!
they cry, as the sweet rays of warmth cover their bodies for morning to come.
~


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ManOnTheMoon commented on simply summer

11-06-2010

Beautiful images formed by the simplest of words, and so few, yet tell a great story. Good write.

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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