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    this is a poem written for me by my dear friend shortie.a confusing situation and a hard choice to make.thank you shortie for being there and for being my friend.

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     i've met somebody new,
    but she's no you,
    you are the one who gave me joy,
    i'll never forget the birth of our baby boy,
    i'm so confused about what to do,
    i can see myself with both of you,
    should i see what the new life will bring,
    or go with the one who wore my ring?

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    aweems commented on ????

    11-12-2009

    BABY, I TOLD U . THAT WHATEVER UR DECISION I WILL STAND BEHIND U ..... I HATE TO LET U GO ..... BUT WHATEVER MAKES U HAPPY AND WHATEVER U THINK IS RIGHT.I CANT MAKE UR DECISION FOR U . U AND ONLY U CAN DO IT? FOLLOW UR HEART .
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    nmedina commented on ????

    11-09-2009

    Very nice, a confusing situation, but ahhh the choices.........whatever the final decision it will bring forth new experiences.
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    MarionYost commented on ????

    11-01-2009

    yeah, Hope I never get caught in this situation. That'd be hell. although. if it were MY situation the choice would be painful yet easy... my ex is a goodhearted Junkie, and the guy I like is a goodhearted responsible man who'd do anything for the ones he loves. haha.. Thank GOD I'm not in that situation though. Good write... Take care All the best. -Marion-
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    shortie13086 commented on ????

    10-29-2009

    aww ur welcome mind glad i could help atleast alittle bit!!!!!!!
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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