say your name (with a bullet)

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  • Anger

    say your name (with a bullet)

    too tired to breath,
    all my patience bled from me,
    too angry to grieve,
    and your too stupid to see,

    pushed too far to give a shit,
    too damn stubborn to quit,
    this raging fire you lit,
    push one more button and your gonna get it.

    and i will,
    say your name with a bullet.

    nowhere to hide,nowhere to go,
    i'll think you dead till i make you so,
    take me on, thats a rough row to hoe,
    im unrelenting,you ought to know,

    when you fall you'll beg mercy from me,
    and i'll smile as i watch you bleed,
    you've gone too far, but you'll soon see,
    its not what you sow, its what you reap,

    and i will,
    say your name with a bullet.

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    icu2 commented on say your name (with a bullet)

    10-21-2009

    Actually...this is a healthy write. Yes. You see, when we artists put to pen our feelings, they settle down and become less tangible...So, keep writing, and never act out the fantasy! This will insure that father who will be there for his son through the years. If you ever kill the person (who probably deserves it) more than likely, they will figure out that it was you. So, just keep on writing baby, and let it go at that... besides, that kind of stuff fuels a writers passion does it not? TEN
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    mindkiller420

    10/21/2009

    thank u so much 4 ur comment. u r right it is my fuel and i wont act it out(but i would love to)lol

    MarionYost commented on say your name (with a bullet)

    10-20-2009

    Wow.... This is crazy good. I've got issues with anger so, I can relate entirely. good job I'll read more later I'm sure... All the best. -Marion-
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    aweems commented on say your name (with a bullet)

    10-15-2009

    Baby! calm down, i can imagine what ur feeling right know. but take a breath and let it out. This is good also. SCARY!!!
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