A Mothers Love

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i love my mother even though she does get on my nerves sometimes i still love her......

A Mothers Love

she gave me shelter from the rain
taught me how to fight the pain.
she loved me more then words can show
and with her love she helped me grow.

she taught me it was wrong to lie
she wiped away the tears i cry.
she caught me every time i was going fall
showed me how to stand up tall.

nothing can beat a mothers love

protected me and taught me how to fight
at the end showed me how to fight for whats right.
she always managed to get on my nerves
but often times its what i deserved.

nothing can beat a mothers love

im all grown up and know enough
ill never foregt she showed that i was tough.
she showed me not to give up and that i was smart
all i had to have was heart.

nothing can beat a mothers love


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Qualin commented on A Mothers Love

06-23-2010

you got that right...never knew my dad....but my Mother was a lady,cook,repairwoman,dancer,ball plyr,balarina with my sister,all the kids in the neighborhooh wanted to be in our destressed lil' home...we were very poor but she made everything seem very,very rich...good write gal...keep it up!!!! your friend Qualin

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