Abandonment

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    Abandonment

    Abandonment


    Indifference takes me
    In again when
    No other would care
    To try
    Abandonment is a
    Backlash from trust
    The sands of time
    Will bury this all
    In time
    Nothing is left sacred
    As all scars are reintroduced
    To old friends
    The stars are dull
    The moon refuses to glow
    As the sun
    Refuses to shine
    In this dead end world
    That is my own
    A guilt as wide
    As an ocean
    With hope as dry
    As a desert
    My clenched fists
    Will do nothing
    Against inner
    Demons
    My thoughts are
    The storyline to
    This wasteland
    A place my soul
    Lurks
    Death’s playground
    The devils pride
    My home for
    The time being
    Sands of time
    Will wash this all
    Away
    Eventually,
    Broken whispers
    Of shattered promises
    Will be carved into
    The hearts of all
    Those who were
    Abandoned
    Ignored until the
    Anger ebbs away
    Sorrow has no place
    To stay
    While indifference paves
    The way
    Hurt fades while
    The color leaves
    Your eyes
    Dull Grey, set in
    Place by the pain of
    Abandonment
    Time will never wash
    Away the scars
    Smother the pain
    For life will surely
    Fade before your subconscious
    Forgets sins done to you.
    ~Kaitlin Platti~

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    Drivingczar commented on Abandonment

    04-12-2009

    A rare, beautiful flower will arise from the ashes and it will be named Platti! The sun will shine through the dark clouds!

    lightcourier commented on Abandonment

    03-25-2009

    Better to work through the scars than to forget or deny them. You have a nice ability to turn a phrase."Nothing is left sacred As all scars are reintroduced To old friends" That is poetry. Fantastic!

    alejapoet commented on Abandonment

    03-05-2009

    I can always relate to a spoken word that is and has been a reality in the lives of so many. Pain-love-sadness-tribulations-sex and love are so deep and dramatic in our lives and you have expressed this so deeply in your words which is a real reality. Author Aleja Bennett http://alejabennett.net84.net http://myspace.com/authoralejabennett

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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