Down Pour

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    Down Pour

    Down Pour



    Words unspoken
    will be our destruction
    communication never was our best thing...
    Now that these streets
    are deserted yet
    again I can
    play in the middle of the road
    in the down pour
    like I always wanted to
    I scream as
    the pelts hit and slide
    down my heated skin
    the corners of my
    mouth lift up
    as I twirl
    and shout at
    the ominous sky
    "I'm Alive!"
    now I lay in
    bed, so close
    yet so far
    your silence turns
    to coldness which
    turns to hurt
    as my mouth
    opens to shatter your
    fail safe
    I have never
    felt so alone
    while so close
    to somebody before
    I splay my fingers
    across your chest
    as I give your lips
    a soft goodbye
    and leave without
    a sound
    never to return again.
    ~Kaitlin Platti~

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    wheelsal commented on Down Pour

    06-26-2009

    Another good read. You are learning to use strong words. I'm impressed.

    Platti

    06/26/2009

    Why thank you! I'm glad that you enjoy my writing!

    StandingBear commented on Down Pour

    05-11-2009

    One way streets are just that, one way. Nice detour. Great write.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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