Plunge

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    Poem Commentary

    I'm getting tired of these ways

    Plunge

    Realize that the
    Only thing that kept
    You from falling
    Apart
    Is now the one
    Thing that holds you
    Back,
    In dwindling twilight
    Close your eyes
    Tight,
    If just for one more
    Time, could I
    Be your
    Friend again?
    The only person who
    Could betray your
    Inner workings
    Now the only thing
    Tearing them out
    If only
    Here the sky
    Is gray,
    Overcast like your
    Cold dead eyes
    I just couldn’t…
    Tear my way past
    Everything that stands
    In my way
    How many more
    Plunges until we’re
    Completely satisfied?
    A sudden rush of
    Emotion
    Lulled over by
    Profound hurt,
    Sorry never got me
    Anywhere
    Plunge into that
    Icy cold water,
    If only it
    All were a dream
    That I had awoken
    From days ago.
    ~Kaitlin Platti~

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    BrittKun commented on Plunge

    12-04-2009

    Wow Good wirte!!!! : ) !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I will give you a 9

    StandingBear commented on Plunge

    11-26-2009

    A work too real, too devastating. A friend today will forget tomorrow. A friend for their own gain is exposed. Well written!

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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