Let Me

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    Let Me
    Let Me
    Let me forgive myself.
    One more stone and my back…
    Will surely break.
    Just a glimpse of your shattered memory,
    The pain is renewed.
    Maybe one more stone…
    Then I might be able to forgive
    Every sin I committed against you,
    My dearest friends.
    I owe you much more than 
    I have been giving.
    Who am I to pretend that I like
    What I’ve become? 
    I wish you the endless happiness
    That I’ve always robbed you of.
    Sometime, I pray, I could be a part of it too.
    A stone for every transgression I have made.
    I hope this back of mine
    Is strong enough. 
    One day I want to join in
    All of your happiness,
    Without tainting it.
    I want this guilt within me
    To wash away.
    Let me forgive myself, 
    So I can be….
    Everything you need in a friend.
    -Kaitlin Platti
    Let me forgive myself.
    One more stone and my back…
    Will surely break.
    Just a glimpse of your shattered memory,
    The pain is renewed.
    Maybe one more stone…
    Then I might be able to forgive
    Every sin I committed against you,
    My dearest friends.
    I owe you much more than 
    I have been giving.
    Who am I to pretend that I like
    What I’ve become? 
    I wish you the endless happiness
    That I’ve always robbed you of.
    Sometime, I pray, I could be a part of it too.
    A stone for every transgression I have made.
    I hope this back of mine
    Is strong enough. 
    One day I want to join in
    All of your happiness,
    Without tainting it.
    I want this guilt within me
    To wash away.
    Let me forgive myself, 
    So I can be….
    Everything you need in a friend.
    -Kaitlin Platti

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    Tony5880 commented on Let Me

    08-27-2013

    I like what I have read I felt the emotion behind every word good write
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    Qualin commented on Let Me

    10-21-2012

    YOU MIGHT BE THE BEST NEW POET I'VE READ LATELY.YOUR STYLE IS ABOVE AVERAGE.....KEEP IT UP GOOD WRITE...QUALIN
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    StandingBear commented on Let Me

    03-19-2011

    A fantastic, deep philosophical write from a great poetess! Certainly your friends appreciate you!
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    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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