About You

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  • Lost Love
    • zorbica
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    About You

    your spirit came to me

    before you were born

     

    there were angels about you

     

    sowing words with beautiful intention

     

    there was something about you

     

    infinite moments spent

     

    thinking about you

     

    food and sleep

    jealous and neglected

     

    it was all about you

     

    aware

    graceful

    kind

     

    things i loved about you

     

    remember when

    i saw you at the park?

     

    i was mad about you

     

    i don't see you anymore...

     

    but i'm still wild about you


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    knight4696 commented on About You

    11-12-2009

    Nice Work Zorbica! I can feel the longing in this one. You certainly have a way with words. Ken

    zorbica

    11/12/2009

    ty ken - longing for sure...

    SavVySam commented on About You

    11-12-2009

    What a beautiful poem of love..and loving. There is something about you as well! Very nice!

    zorbica

    11/12/2009

    ty SavVy - what a lovely thing to say...

    dancinghawk commented on About You

    11-10-2009

    luv this, zorbica! completely intangible and real at once ... beautiful write ... -dh

    zorbica

    11/12/2009

    great compliment - thanks dh

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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