Alone

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Alone

The pain stabs
When I see them kiss
In the halls

My heart dies
Everytime I see his posts to her
On my wall

My soul shrivels up
When they are always together
Forever
When they are engaged
When they are on their honeymoon
When they have children
When they're graves are next to each other

And I stand there alone.
All alone.

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papapaczki commented on Alone

12-20-2010

Its tough to let go sometimes. Time will heal tho. Good poem and story.

angelchaser commented on Alone

12-20-2010

This is the first poem I've read of yours, I like it very much. The pain of which you speak is almost unbearable and I speak from experience. There isn't a pain in the world like loving someone that doesn't love you back. This poem expresses that pain very, very well. Nicely done.

koolmom0 commented on Alone

12-19-2010

Well honey, again another well written piece....Trust me when I say that your heart will mend, find peace and your heart will go on. :) Koolmom0

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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