Truly Shine

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    Truly Shine

    When the sun cries
    Someone hurt her
    And no one cared enough to help her
    When the clouds come
    You know she is having a bad day
    No one to cheer her up
    When the storm clears
    You know a friend was there
    To help her through the hard times
    And when the sun shines
    The sky is content
    But when does the sun ever truly shine?

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    winterkou commented on Truly Shine

    12-17-2010

    I like the way you describe the sun, nice write. good job.
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    Chigger2069 commented on Truly Shine

    12-13-2010

    Nice job love the way you use the sun, keep up the great work 10 from me.
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    ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on Truly Shine

    12-13-2010

    I like this one. I can feel the emotions clearly conveyed. Life related to weather is a very true analogy. Questioning whether the sun truly shines makes me feel like your searching for light. This is a very intriguing write........E
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    Artie commented on Truly Shine

    12-13-2010

    This is an interesting write. I like the imagery you use - nice job
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    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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