I Hope Not

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    I Hope Not

    The stars in the sky
    Don't know any better than to shine

    The rain in your hair
    Doesn't know any better than to fall

    The trees behind your house
    Don't know any better than to grow

    The fish in your pond
    Don't know any better than to swim

    The birds on your roof
    Don't know any better than to fly

    I, standing infront of you,
    Don't know any better than to love
    Maybe I do know better

    But I hope not

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    Chigger2069 commented on I Hope Not

    12-13-2010

    I like the way you put this whole thing together keep up the great work 10 from me
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    Artie commented on I Hope Not

    12-13-2010

    I like what you did here. The feeling this gives, is pure and strong - 10 from me
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    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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