Heaven vs. Hell

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    Heaven vs. Hell

     The unicorns prance
    The flowers grow
    Rainbows fill the sky
    Chilrdren play, furry friends frolic

    Beasts of fire snarl
    The flames grow
    Smoke blacks out the sky
    Devils bet, their slaves doing as commanded

    The beasts of fire swallow the unirons whole
    The flames envelop the flowers
    The smoke devours the rainbows
    The devils kill

    Nothing is left
    Only a barren, charred wasteland
    Not even a splotch of green
    Black and grey, fires smoldering

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    winterkou commented on Heaven vs. Hell

    12-17-2010

    interesting write, not sure what to say about this, not what i had in mine picture flowers and rainbows from reading the title
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    rubyplayssoccer

    12/17/2010

    yeah that one was kind of a silly write

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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