Autumn in my heart

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    Autumn in my heart

    Two hearts beats as one
    But one has to go
    When one needs to be alone
    Why I left, I don’t know

    We used to walk hand in hand
    At the park near our town
    So many things we have said and done
    And there our love was found

    If only I could go back to say what I want to say
    To tell you what you need to know
    But we know that there’s nothing we can do
    And now I have to go

    Now I’m gone like it should be
    I don’t know how to say goodbye
    When we both know there were you and me
    I left you with a cry

    I’m in a park with so many trees
    But the leaves were on the ground
    I see you there like we used to be
    But there was no me to be found

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    staryoung commented on Autumn in my heart

    09-10-2009

    I have read only a few of your poems and I have enjoyed each one of them. Your writing is overflowing with emotion. You write from your heart, thats allows others to connect and bond with your words. Good Read!

    creonis

    09/10/2009

    thanks for the compliment...=)

    jam4muzic commented on Autumn in my heart

    08-05-2009

    Wow..I really liked it. Sounds deep and very meaningful. It sounds like whatever you did, you now seem regretful. but, hey! That's what I got from the story. You're from the Philippines? that's soo cool, I'm Filipino. kamusta ka? xLolx. Do you mind checking out my poems? I want to know the opinions of others...

    loanslanger commented on Autumn in my heart

    07-23-2009

    I liked your poem, my man. Nice and deep. Sounds like it came from the heart.

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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