When i die

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    • creonis
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    When i die

    when i die, will you cry for me?
    and follow me 'til my last resting place
    or just smile and be happy with somebody else...

    when i die, will you remember me?
    the way i smile or kiss you good night
    and holding' your hand so tight
    or just forget me like you never knew me at all...

    and now that I'm dead, will you ever do this for me?
    or just hold my hands before my last breath
    but i guess you can't 'coz you're with somebody else
    and for that, for you I'm dead...

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    Siren commented on When i die

    05-20-2010

    Fading away...little by little...and being replaced...while still trying to hang on...doesn't worth the try anymore...

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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