REWIND

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    REWIND

    i wish to have a wish
    that i could go back in time
    to see and warn myself
    that it's not the right time

    i thought it was too late
    it was not, but it was too early
    when i told you what i feel
    guess you weren't ready

    april 14 when i called you down stairs
    and asked you a favor
    "can we talk over there?"
    you said yes while waiting for a friend
    but i didn't know that was my end

    i told you what i feel
    and i know it was right
    everything changed
    everything lost it sight

    you weren't ready
    you can't commit
    and there's nothing i can do
    i lost, i admit

    days had passed
    from the day i confessed
    wish i could go back
    to clean up this mess

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    staryoung commented on REWIND

    09-10-2009

    I have felt this way! Sometimes I'm glad I cant go back in time to change things, those sitations have helped me in some way, opening my eyes to realize my faults or to make me a stronger person for the future events. Life must go on.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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