If Love won’t love

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    If Love won’t love

    I thought I knew everything about this life
    I thought I knew how to love and how to survive
    But why is that, things are more than what it seems
    You thought its reality but it was just a dream


    I cherished those days when I was with you
    Thought it was my life, a dream come true
    But I never imagined that it would end this way
    When I told you what I feel, you left me in dismay


    I tried everything just to make you mine
    I guess they were right, it was not my time
    All I ever want is for you to love me
    That’s all I ever want, but why GOD still can’t see

    Maybe I wasn’t meant to love at all
    A man with a curse to fall from a fall
    Guess they were right; you can’t force someone to love
    And I guess there’s nothing I can do if love won’t love

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    Siren commented on If Love won’t love

    05-20-2010

    Unbelievably close to my experience this poem of yours Creonis...A very wise friend of mine told me recently: "you shouldn't look for others love...seek your own love first..." I think my friend knows exactly how I am feeling.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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